Waiting by the window
listening to the wind blow
when are you coming home?
You know the hour is growing late
and though I tire, I will wait
until I know for certain we’re alone.
At the mirror, you’ll comb your hair
make your bed and say your prayer
turn the bedroom light down soft and low.
And I will stand here in the dark
(swallowed by the teeming dark)
laughing at my little lark
And wait and breathe and watch you through the window.
Very intriguing, and in it’s introverted way, can be interpreted in different ways.
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Many thanks, Ivor.
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Ivor has nailed this mystifying, thought-provoking piece
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I didn’t intend for it to be mysterious, but I am delighted by the reaction. Thanks for reading and commenting, Derrick.
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🙂
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I agree–it can be interpreted in many ways.
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It was supposed to be a creepy poem about a peeping Tom, or something like that. But I’m always happy when readers take their own interpretations. Makes it more interesting for them and me. ☺ Thanks, Merril.
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I thought first it was a lover, then maybe a ghost, but at the end I did think creepy peeping Tom. I thought maybe I was reading that into it! It is totally creepy.
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🙂 Thank you.
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Deliciously dark Oglach.
A wicked hunter observing his innocence prey.
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I knew you of all people would appreciate that, Alan. Many thanks.
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It’s Mother’s Day over here today, so I’m interpreting this as a mother poem. A kind of creepy mother, mind you. 😉
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That’s an interesting, Hitchcockian twist. 🙂
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The creepy peeping tom who emerges in the last stanza is almost likable in his willingness to endure the cold wind for the sake of looking w/o touching (or otherwise disturbing). I still hope the window is locked.
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She needs to plant some rose bushes in front of the window. Or put a beehive there or something. 🙂 Thanks for reading.
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very nice poem
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thank you
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Maybe the lover is dead and he just can watch his fiancée but can’t touch her or reach her…
That’s my interpretation, though… 🙂
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What ever you think it means, it does. The reader is always right. 🙂
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I agree to that…
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Ooh! Creepy piece of poetry I must say but very intriguing and thought-provoking too!
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Thanks, Sarah. 🙂
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If I’d known that was you last night, I would’ve left my window unlocked. Come on in, Oggy. We could scare each other all night. 😁 I loooooved your poem.
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It almost felt like a waste to write it without you to read it…but I thought you might come around eventually. You little stalker, you. 😉 Thanks a million, Rose. Love your photo, by the way. You look just like you do through your window.
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Haha! You tickle me. I am a stalker of your words. No one holds my attention quite like you do. Thank you, my Irish friend. xo
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Well! You and Rose make the story really hum. It is fun to read but the construction is also really interesting. I am going to enjoy these.
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Rose is a delight. Glad you enjoyed reading, many thanks for the comment.
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