Not the man you wanted me to be
too strong to be a failure
too just to be an enemy
lay down your arms
and make peace with the last of me.
Sure I threw that wrench in your ingenious machine
you made believe you had it all
your dream was pristine
and I just couldn’t stand to let you hang
on your own delusions.
Sooner or later you were bound to take a fall
sooner or later, you were bound to give me a call
how am I the villian
for being around to pick up the phone?
It isn’t fair to either of us
to blame me for your confusion.
I know I’m not the nemesis that you need
we’re both criminals of the heart
deserters lost at sea
so fall into my arms
and make peace with the last of me.
Gosh – there’s a story here
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Indeed there is. Thanks for reading, Derrick.
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I agree with Derrick, a tumultuous story, it seems.
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Thanks, Merril. Remember when people used to get bored? Damn those were good times. 😉
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😉
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A wonderful piece of writing Oglach. Enjoyed.
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Many thanks, Alan.
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Reblogged this on seachranaidhe1.
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The phrase «too just to be an enemy» resonates.
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Many thanks.
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gorgeous
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Thank you so much.
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Relationships are so damn complicated. There’s always that one person who has the power to make you feel like a jellyfish that has been washed ashore. I was swept up by the tide of emotions your brilliant words evoked. I loved your poem and read it over and over. I’m now dizzy and a bit seasick from your tsunami. Powerful stuff, Oggy.
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Thank you so much, Rose. That one came straight from the heart and as such, it was a bit of a mess. 😉 I’m privileged to have readers like you to share my thoughts with.
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fuckin amazing 😀
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Thanks a million, Josh. 🙂
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Awesome piece of writing! And like Rose I feel a little dizzy now from all the emotions seeping through every line…
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Thank you so much, Sarah. It’s hard to let the walls down sometimes, and it’s gratifying when people respond when you do.
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I know exactly what you mean!
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Superb 😊
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Many thanks. 🙂
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At the risk of seeming to be doing a little self promotion I was once, thirty years ago, stopped by a lady who used the line “you know what I mean”. I didn’t know what she meant. They speak a different language and often the misinterpretation can be fatal. In my case it still scares the bejeezus out of me. You don’t have to look but I’d be proud if you did. https://wp.me/p8PuzR-18K
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So good!
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Thanks so much, Inese.
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